Storyboard

(Due to being done in pencil some of the drawings did not come through clearly I have edited them so most appear as they are supposed to but some could not be fixed.)

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Prop List

Prop List

Prop	Where to get it from
Play station Controllers	- Producers have these
Towel	- Producers have these
Mug	- Producers have these
Post-it notes	- Buy these from poundland
Prop Knife	-Disappearing Joke Knife SuperFunStuff.co.uk
Fake Blood	-Buy this from poundland
Kitchen Knife Holder	- Producers have this

Shot list

Shot list 

This is a general list of shots used in the storyboard and what they will be in the trailer. Some might change in the actual thing.

Shot 1: Close up

Shot 1: Long shot

Shot 2: Close up

Shot 3: Medium close up

Shot 4: Long shot

Shot 5: Close up

Shot 6: Long shot

Shot 7: Close up

Shot 8: Medium shot

Shot 9: Medium shot

Shot 11: Establishing shot

Shot 12: Medium shot

Shot 13: Long shot

Shot 14: Medium shot

Shot 14b: Medium shot

Shot 15: Long shot

Shot 16: Over the shoulder

Shot 17: Medium shot

Shot 18: Close up

Shot 19: Close up

Shot 22: Medium shot

Shot 23: Point of view shot

Shot 24: Point of view shot

Shot 25: Long shot

Shot 26: Medium shot

Shot 28: Close up

Shot 29: Medium shot

Shot 30: Long shot

Shot 32: Long shot

Shot 33: Long shot

Shot 34: Long shot

Shot 35: Close up

Shot 37: Medium shot

Shot 38: Medium shot

Shot 39: Extreme close up

Shot 40: Medium shot

Shot 41: Long shot

Shot 42: Long shot

Shot 43: Medium shot

Shot 45: Long shot

Shot 46: Long shot

Shot 47: Close up

Shot 49: Long shot (scary thingy)

Shot 50: Long shot

Story Board Plan

Story Board Plan

Characters

Dead Brother: Ryan

Alive Brother: Jack

Persons A,B,C&D

Shot 1a: There is a voice over of the news on TV, reporting recent murders and a L cut to shot 1b

Shot 1b: A close up pan of many gravestones

Shot 1c: long shot of people at grave during a funeral. It is raining and the middle of day.

Shot 2: A close up side profile of Jack looking down at grave and looking sorrowful. This ends with a fade out.

Shot 3: There is a fade in to Jack in the shower at a medium shot and low angle. The sound of rain turns into the shower water dripping

Shot 4: Flashback of Jacks happy memory of him and Ryan playing video games.

Shot 5: Close up of Jack in shower eyes closed in present time

Shot 6: Flashback of Jack walking towards crowds of people at the crime scene of Ryan’s death

Shot 7: A close up shot of Jack grabbing a towel in present time

Shot 8: Flashback of Jack at crime scene as a long shot looking over people in the crowd. You see face turn from curiosity to distraught and barging threw the crowd in slow motion. Then there’s a point of view shot of Jack looking at Ryan’s body.

Shot 9: There’s a medium shot of him getting out the shower, walks past the mirror with Ryan in the reflection once he has gone past

Shot 10: Logo

Shot 11: Establishing shot of friends at park 

Shot 12: The friends talking but Jack is looking down in sorrow

Shot 13: Straight cut to Person A yelling insults about Ryan

Shot 14: Jack walks by the Person A but knocks shoulders as he leaves

Shot 14b: Group shot of friends looking confused and angry at Person A

Shot 15: Fade in to long shot of Jack sitting in living room where he hears a loud thump heard so he gets up and goes to kitchen

Shot 16: Finds a mug on floor goes to pick them up, nothing is on the side of the table and is out of focus

Shot 17: Jack stands back up and sees the note on the side of the table, the note goes into focus

Shot 18: Close up of his face showing confusion and a low angle from where the note is

Shot 19: Close up of note that has writing in red pen

Shot 20: Tone card saying payback which fades out to black

Shot 21: Darkness on screen with heavy breathing from Person A running  

Shot 22: Straight cut to medium close up of person leaning on tree

Shot 23: Point of view shot looking to right side of tree to find nothing

Shot 24: Straight cut to a point of view shot of looking to left side of tree. Person A seeing the murderer, wearing hood so face is not visible and see the knife being raised by killer

Shot 25: Person A stabbed in neck high angle looking down at body and then fades out

Shot 26: Jump cut to brothers house where a friend is telling Jack that Person A body was found  

Shot 27: Flash into a tone card ‘justice’

Shot 28: Someone looking around them for danger while it is quiet

Shot 29: Medium shot of Girl A with killer behind her who wraps his arm around neck from behind her. Then he drags her into the darkness.

Shot 30: Person B running from killer in ally way

Shot 31: Darkness on screen with screaming ‘Why are you doing this!?’ 

Shot 32: Killer walking holding bloody knife by his  side while exiting a dark house

Shot 33: Person C walks through the door

Shot 34: Killer is hiding behind the door

Shot 35:  A bloody hand on window sliding down

Shot 36: Tone card of revenge

Shot 37:  Hand pulling knife out of holder

Shot 38: Blood running down floor

Shot 39: Extreme close up of eye

Shot 40: Jack being punched

Shot 41: Person D jumping over fence

Shot 42: Person D falling over

Shot 43: Killer pulling up victim by front of shirt to stab them

Shot 44: Darkness

Shot 45: Jack in room crying and rocking back and forth

Shot 46: Long shot of Jack in room whispering to someone or himself in room

Shot 47: Close up of Jack in room whispering to someone or himself in room

Shot 48: Title

Shot 49: Jumpy scary thing

Shot 50: Killer standing at door dripping with blood in near darkness

Shot 51: Coming soon

Trailer analysis: Editing

Treatment: trailer

Treatment written Todd C. Green

The scene starts with a man arriving at a police investigation, seeing the scene he runs in with the officers trying to stop him until he freezes at the sight of a body of a man covered in blood. (Lots of slow-motion and crying)




We then see the man in a room being talked to by an officer about the death revealing the victim was his brother. The officer talks to the man questioning him about who could be responsible saying they'll find and arrest them.




The scene changes to the ending of a funeral with the man standing in the rain staring at the grave. Then we change to the man at home some friends chatting with him trying to cheer him up saying, "cheer up man or you might go crazy" 


The man sleeping twist and turns in his bed haunted by nightmares then he is shocked awake. As he tries to calm himself he hears a noise and goes to look in the dark. He finds things knocked over in the living room he looks around shouting for whoever is there to come out, when suddenly he is pushed into a chair and a hand is around his throat.

We then see the brother speaking to the man holding him by the throat "I'm stuck to you brother just like we always were. I want your help little brother, I can't do anything to anyone else..." The brother leans in with a menacing smile and says "...But YOU can."  

The scene goes through multiple people the brother voice saying, "I know who is behind my murder but like I said I can't do anything to them. But together we are going to get some justice".

Next we see the man talking to his friend from before feeling confused and worried asks him for help trying to prove whom he is told was the killer is right. Saying "I'm worried that my brother won't be the only person that this guys gonna kill you gotta help me.".

The scene changes to the man and a woman running down a darkened corridor looking behind them both of them covered in dirt and some blood.

The scene changes to an interrogation chamber with the Detective from before shouting at the man and hitting the table whilst another watches through the two way mirror. "The only thing linking these murders is YOU and that gives me a few ideas about what is going on so either you know something you aren't telling us."

Finally the scene changes to a woman in the dark breathing heavily looking side to side when suddenly a hand reaches around and grabs her mouth and pulls her into the shadows as her eyes widen in terror.