Friday, 26 September 2014

Treatment: trailer

Treatment written Todd C. Green


The scene starts with a man arriving at a police investigation, seeing the scene he runs in with the officers trying to stop him until he freezes at the sight of a body of a man covered in blood. (Lots of slow-motion and crying)
We then see the man in a room being talked to by an officer about the death revealing the victim was his brother. The officer talks to the man questioning him about who could be responsible saying they'll find and arrest them.
The scene changes to the ending of a funeral with the man standing in the rain staring at the grave. Then we change to the man at home some friends chatting with him trying to cheer him up saying, "cheer up man or you might go crazy" 


The man sleeping twist and turns in his bed haunted by nightmares then he is shocked awake. As he tries to calm himself he hears a noise and goes to look in the dark. He finds things knocked over in the living room he looks around shouting for whoever is there to come out, when suddenly he is pushed into a chair and a hand is around his throat.

We then see the brother speaking to the man holding him by the throat "I'm stuck to you brother just like we always were. I want your help little brother, I can't do anything to anyone else..." The brother leans in with a menacing smile and says "...But YOU can."  

The scene goes through multiple people the brother voice saying, "I know who is behind my murder but like I said I can't do anything to them. But together we are going to get some justice".

Next we see the man talking to his friend from before feeling confused and worried asks him for help trying to prove whom he is told was the killer is right. Saying "I'm worried that my brother won't be the only person that this guys gonna kill you gotta help me.".

The scene changes to the man and a woman running down a darkened corridor looking behind them both of them covered in dirt and some blood.

The scene changes to an interrogation chamber with the Detective from before shouting at the man and hitting the table whilst another watches through the two way mirror. "The only thing linking these murders is YOU and that gives me a few ideas about what is going on so either you know something you aren't telling us."

Finally the scene changes to a woman in the dark breathing heavily looking side to side when suddenly a hand reaches around and grabs her mouth and pulls her into the shadows as her eyes widen in terror.

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